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Emma: *sits in my window looking out over the lake I just swam in* (gtg be back on later)
Emma: it's Emma, *looks him up and down then grabs my daggers and walks into the shop* (gtg will be on later)
(gtg I will be back later)
Kally: *Wraps more gauze around sam* common Sammie your not going to die... *sniffs tears start running* it's ok your still alive!
Emma: lie about what?
Emma: *raises An eyebrow then extends my hands* I'm Emma nice to meet you!
I think that the length you have them is good! It's a great story it makes you want to keep reading!
Kally: *wraps up sam's wound* common Sammie hang in there! Emma: Ashe? Elizabeth: *starts puking over the edge of the ship sick of all the blood*
Emma: *looks up hearing someone approach I jump down and peek my head out seeing a guy walking towards the building i swiftly take out my daggers...
Emma: *is laying down hand over my stomach some blood seeping out of a huge gash
Emma: *looks over at him* funny I always seemed to find the time... *she says* I loved my guitar and then woke night I wouldn't do what my brother...
Kally: *stands up pushing angel away grabbing my sister jumping onto the other ship then starts dressing her wound ignoring the cuts on my body*...
Emma: *sits on the bench where we met. Sketching a sad girl at the coffee shop*
(WHOA!) Emma: *smiles and tosses a piece of my bread to Nikolai* that's cute! I played my guitar in a tree watching the sky... *laughs* less...
Kally: *falls into the water in the water I kiss jones one last time then I take angel and start swimming to the top slashing up jones so that the...
(lol kally isn't dying don't worry!)
Kally: *nods* trust me Sam let go of my hand...
(hahaha ya scratch the whole kally thing!)
Kally: *screams half overboard* Sam let go I will get angel!