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Riku: What..? What do you mean? *Looks worried and a bit scared*
(Oh, lol, I thought Ben had already run to Axel and Lily...)
Axel: *Looks over* Ben! Hey, bud... Sorry you had to see me like this... Hey, listen close now... I want you to take care of Lily... I need you to...
Riku: ... In what way..?
Axel: *Kisses her back weakly* Paramedics: *Rush over and quickly look at Axel* Excuse us, ma'am, but you need to let him go for us to check...
Kris: *Hugs her again and kisses her passionately*
Riku: *Follows her* What is it you want to talk about?
Axel: Hey... Everything will play out as it is supposed to... I promise you that things will work out... Eventually... *Smiles weakly* (I JUST...
Riku: Of course... (Should Riku be calling Raven "Mistress" still?)
Kris: Don't worry about it... *Smiles at her*
(Luce... Waiting again )
Riku: Sounds like a good idea to me... But what will be my role in this? *Sees Luce and grows silent*
Axel: *Chuckles slightly, then coughs again* Internal bleeding... I think a rib might've cut a lung... Look... Before I miss my chance... I need...
Kris: *Kisses Luce quickly, and chuckles* If I was still human, I'd be red as a tomato, and my heart would sound like a jackhammer...
(Oh noes! Riku's gonna get it when Raven finds out )
Kris: Thanks... *Looks extremely embarrased*
Axel: *Smiles, happy to see her face, utterly oblivious to his pain, and coughs, blood running slightly from the corner of his mouth*
Riku: *Watches quietly* (Read a few pages back, Imani... Riku's been baaaaad )
(AXEL'S ALIVE, IMANI!)
Riku: *Walks to Raven*