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*facepalm*
Valeri sighed and looked at Amber. "Who is that guy?" She thought to herself
Valeri: "thats not even a good idea."
Seth: "i'd do what she says."
(I missed out and she was walking by herself.)
Valeri: "you know you dont have to be."
Seth: "or controlled..." Alex released Fawn's hand and walked away. He grabbed a gun and climbed up a tree. He went straight to the top and kept...
Alex thought for a moment a picks up Fawn hand before kissing her knuckles. (So sorry!!!)
Alex: "that eyebrow raise." Seth: "nothing."
Seth laughed. Alex: "i saw that Kesi."
(Cool. Did you check the new Creeper?) Seth chuckles. "Whatever you say Doc." Valeri shook her head as Alex came back and sat next to Fawn.
Seth sighed. Valeri: "really?" (Dont you mean high school?)
Valeri: "because i'll shoot him in the balls if i stay more than 1 minute near him."
Seth: "im his brother." Valeri: "im trying to figure out if you like him." She looked at Kesi. "What's so funny?"
Seth: "i know its not my business but what have you both talked about?" Valeri watches as Alex started a fire. "You are always staring at him...
Seth: "is that so? Has he spoken calmly to you?" Valeri: "im fine. I saw the way you looked at Alex."
Seth: "why?" Alex got up and rumage through the duffle bag. Valeri sat with Fawn. "Are you ok?"
Alex smiled innocently which shocked her before releasing her hand
Seth sat up at and swivelled to face her. "What do you mean?" Alex: "but it wasnt..."
Seth: "his is to kill me..."