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Axel: *Blushes and smiles at her* You are so beautiful...
Lauryn: *Smiles* How much have you read at the library? I haven't seen you around there...
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Axel: *Returns the lust and passion, gazing deeply into her eyes*
Lauryn: *Brightens a little* Really? What sort of books?
Axel: *Holds her tightly and kisses her lovingly*
Lauryn: It depends on what kind of person you are... I like reading, but others prefer swimming, or quidditch, or talking, or anything you can...
Axel: *Smiles in the kiss, wrapping his arms around her gently*
Lauryn: *Nods sadly and looks out over the lake*
Axel: *Kisses her softly*
(Lily, Lauryn said something last page!)
Axel: *Gently puts his hands on her shoulders* Hey, listen to me, we'll make it through this...
Axel: *Slowly walks towards Lily* Lily..? Are you alright..?
Axel: *Eyes widen* Oh, Lily, I'm so sorry!
(Rofl, obviously I saw the wrong name ) Lauryn: Y-yes, but here, it's worse than normal... Here is where my finacé was beaten horribly, and I was...
Axel: *Eyes locked on Lily, fearing the worst* Well..?
Lauryn: *Jumps and hides for a second before seeing who it is* O-oh, hello Lily... *Waves a little*
(Lol, not you too! ) Axel: *Pulls it out* Here it is... *Hands it to her*
(Randomly jumping in) Lauryn: *At the lake alone*
(Lol, why?) Axel: *Nods and opens her bag, looking for it*