Separate names with a comma.
(So did I, it was on page 15 or so...)
Axel: *Laughs softly* How fitting... I think it's perfect... *Smiles at the sleeping boy* Hmmm, but what about him..?
(Opal? Or SCO? ) Axel: *Watches the little boy fall asleep* So cute...
Axel: *Blushes* *The boy looks up and shows not quite Lily's eyes, but one of each color from both parents* Axel: Wow...
Axel: I'm still amazed we have twins... What shall we call them?
(Idm )
Axel: *Smiles brightly*
(Yup! Thank God!)
Axel: I'm right here, Lily, I'll be here the whole time, I promise...
(This is worth reviving!)
Cloud: *Keeps going*
Axel: *Calls for help, and a couple angels appear and help him put her in a bed and prepare for the birth*
Axel: *Looks at Juliet, then to Lily* Hang on tight! *Disappears in a ball of light, with Lily, and reappears at camp*
Axel: Lily! *Hugs her tightly*
Axel: *Reaches Lily and lands*
(ROFL, I was thinking of Vamp High ) Axel: *Dives towards Lily* HOLD ON!
Cloud: JULIET! *Flies up high, following the sounds of the screaming*
Axel: *Glares at Juliet* You dare threaten me? *Raises his sword* Fight me, if you dare...
Axel: *Looks up* What?
Axel: LILY! *Tries to reach her before she disappears* DAMMIT!