Separate names with a comma.
Then you better update.. I'm not afraid to do it..
- raises an eyebrow - ghezz, why are you so grumpy, I can understand that you won't exactly be jumping.. But I'm not that grumpy and I'm a vampire...
Bump! If anyone doesn't like this story then they are just wrong in the head Update soon
Lexi; I know you didn't, but if you don't.. I will.. - grins and walks closer to dean -
When are you going to update!? don't make me kill the koala! , please let the koala live! By doing this you will have to Update! Other wise..
Lexi; I'm not annoying! - grins - but, if I see that wolf one more time I will rip its head off.. - laughs -
• Try and use paragraphs • Use comma's now and again Apart from that, Well Done Update!
Bump! •Use Paragraphs •Use comma's now and again Just some tips for the future Apart from that Well Done Update soon!
Bump!
Lexi; - laughs - why?
- laughs - was the wolf bothering you?
- sees dean - um... Hey!
Okayy!
- turns around - I said let's go.
See you later! - jumps out the window and onto the wall -
Oh.. Where is mack? - looks around -
Elza; yes, but.. Fine , let's go. - stands up -
Ok thanks
Am I accepted?