Separate names with a comma.
That wasn't harsh… Anyway, he already said some of my feedback. Also, you should separate thoughts and sentences with commas and periods. Try...
*always the I made a mistake- *dies*
Deadly Sin- Surprise Update I awoke to the light smell of herbs meeting my nostrils. Sitting up, I found myself in Ian's bed yet again. I...
My Better Half - Surprise Update I shakily pulled my hand back from the shattered mirror, feeling the stinging pain attack my fingers. They...
Re: **** What is this… I don't even… *facewall* OFF. TOPIC.
Gah. That's upsetting. I hope things turn out alright- *jabbers on optimistically*
ZOMGQWERTYUIOP- I love this story! I officially dislike the characters Rick and Chelsea Their personalities are too dramatic. Rick overreacts...
Quite classy Chloe, quite. Unrequited love? Faith? Imani loves this story.
Never mind, then…
[img] This is a gif… but, eh.
Enjoy your silence.
That's odd.
Look, I know the three of you are upset. But making another thread will only start up more drama and fuel more arguments.
Sir. My lack of response should answer your question. >.>
THANKSALOTBEKKAOHMYGOODNESS- *runs to pm*
Then start another. That's all you can do. .-.
This has a great, descriptive start! I like it already.
If Chelsea overreacts, I will mentally slap her.
Rhyan. I'm pretty sure that's a no. EMERGENCYBEKKA!
BEKKAMON! INEEDYOUTOINBOXME-