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Zankar looked at him. "Thank you." Lucy chuckled. "I was called away to analyze some new strangers in town."
Rayla: "i dont know the rest of it since i was born a year later."
There are a few spelling errors but overall its very good
Darkai: "Seren..."
Ravyn growled. Rayla: "he lost our sister..." Arija gaped at him. "Hey!" She got up not caring if she was naked
Zankar hugged May and she hugged him. Lucy came back and pulled the sheet down slightly and kissed his hair
Rayla: "he's mad st himself."
Rayla: "he really isnt. Swear."
Rayla grinned and nodded. "Yup. He isnt a horrible guy."
Rayla held her hand out. "Rayla."
The girl smirked. "My sister...."
The girl looked at her. "Excuse me?"
A girl looking just like Ravyn was sitting there as well. Derek kissed his hair
Derek: "i know..." He held his arms open for Ciel
(Good night..... XD) Lyn just followed him
Lyn nodded. "Yes..."
(CAT FIGHT!!!)
Ravyn smiled. "Hey..." Lyn kissed him back
Derek kissed Ciel's head before letting him run to Akane. Lex pushed her against Seth who caught her before walking away. Seth: "i think you...
Lyn: "..... yes."