Separate names with a comma.
(and personality will be needed.)
Robert *Takes out a cigarette he rolled earlier and places it between his chapped lips, flicks the lighter and lights the cigarette cautiously....
(Accepted, but you just need to add in your misfortunate event.)
Robert *Stares grimly at the passing children.*
Robert *Sits on the porch outside of his house fumbling with his lighter.* Is wearing a plain White shirt with the sleeves rolled up with...
(Should have made it a little clearer but this is set in the '50s.)
Dance, dance-Fall out boy What did you say again?
Setting: The children blissfully unaware head off to school and the adults go about their daily lives still wonderin' whether demons, ghosts and...
Sorry for keepin' you waiting so long, but I was out all last night with my mates. Also some of you need to understand I do have a life of my own...
Robert Dowsett 30 [img] Personality: He's reserved and not many people know what he gets up to behind closed doors. He's very open-minded about...
Need to use more commas and full stops and obviously paragraphs. But overall it's a very good piece of writing.
Before the disappearance of Elizabeth Enders in 1892, the town of Mineral was a quiet, peaceful haven located in Northern Ireland. For people to...
Well, when I was younger my Mum was trying to make me and my little sister more experimental with our food. So my sister decided to make me a...
Saxon *Carries his suitcases to the lobby inside. Turns back to Abigail.* Do you want me to bring your suitcases in for you?
(Actually I was never inside.)
Saxon *Keeps fidgeting.*
Foster Yeah... *Trudges to his cabin.*
(i'm not sure either, but from what I recall my character (Saxon) is still hanging out with yours.)
Foster 'Cause I saw you and her earlier and you're twins!
Foster Take a leaf out of your sisters book then.