Separate names with a comma.
BUMP! Your doing a great job with this. I'm just finding in some spots you rush it through a lot and I think you should slow it down. But other...
Torrance, nope! Everything is okay! Nice pjs drew! And lovely art Katie! *grabs a cookie from Emma and I start decorating With the flowers...
Sophie: *my eyes are wide and my Body is shivering madly* WHERE THE HELL AM I? *i then start to cry and I curl up in a small ball leaning on this...
Sophie: *tried to crawl away screaming my head off so the horse will leave not really knowing what else to do. The rider gets thrown off*
Torrance: *all of a sudden you guys hear a HUGE crash and then a louder bang a couple of cuss words and then my head around the corner* SURPRISE!
(where did we leave of raven?)
Torrance: *knocks on the door holding tons of flowers and then a huge cart that rolls* KATIE? OPEN THE HELL UP YOU LOVELY AARDVARK!
Sophie: *a horse walks past her and she starts screaming I start to stand up and try and run away but I trip on my dress and I see the horse...
(accepted Katie)
Sophie: TORRANCE? *screams again as loud as she can* Torrance: *had fallen and knocked her head on a rock* Sophie: *sees a village and runs...
~all your windows fly open the lights flicker then everything goes black~ Sophie: *screams* Torrance; SOPHIE? *runs up the stairs in the dark...
DIBS ON BEING ANNIE!!!! AND WENDY!!!! OH OH OH AND AND AND 0.0 ummm idk but i can't make my profiles right now cuz I have to go do a few things...
(ok guys! We can start the timewarp!) ~your computers all of a sudden go completely blank after you add those names~
Torrance. *logs off and goes to Katie's house*
Torrance: *starts texting someone quickly then I look up biting my lip*
Torrance: *looks up and sees everyone crying feels kinda awkward cuz I'm not crying*
Torrance: *looks down* Katie where do you live? Can I have your address please? *has a pen and paper out and I'm writing something down*
Torrance: *gives a small gasp* KATIE! Oh no! That's so terrible! I'm super sorry to hear that! ...
Torrance: *laughs then waves her hands at her brother* SHOOOO! Kevin: *jumps infront of the screen* hey everyone! Oh and nice painting! *runs...
Torrance: NO PROB! *yells so it gets across to her* Kevin: *breaks into her room* WHAT THE HELL IS UP WITH THE YELLING? Torrance: *folds arms...