Separate names with a comma.
(Yes. The school understands that most of the students will have dietry requirements).
Edward He takes out a crumpled up piece of paper and a pen from his blazer pocket and begins writing on it. [i]Hi, my name's Edward. If you're...
(There's no final year room; everyone eats together on seperate tables.)
*at the girl*
Edward He discreetly looks at the eating her chips for a minute, then returns to his tofu salad.
Edward He starts picking at his food.
Edward He watches the waiters gracefully walk over to them with their meals. He looks down at the food, then back at the waiter. "Thank you." He...
(First years, second years and final years.) Edward He pulls out his chair and sits down, feeling as though everyone is staring at his appearance.
Edward He follows the teachers into the dining room, and takes a seat at the final years table.
Starting next week I'll be spending 3 weeks in Germany helping to train up soilders (i'm in the army). When I come back I'll definately be going...
(Also, I never mentioned that students were allowed in the hall yet.) Edward Stands in a orderly queue with a few of the other final year students.
My favourite songs are: Hey Jude Twist and shout Strawberry fields of love A little help from my friends
(No food has been dished out yet.)
Edward He gets up from the bench, dusts himself off and beings walking to the dining room.
The school bells rings several times which means the beginning of the year feast has begun. Also, students are to be seated with their own years...
(Cannot stress this enough, but nowhere in the plot did I mention that your characters have class on the first day.)
Accepted.
(You need to add in a background story for your character, then I'll accept.
Edward He rolls down his blazer sleeve and checks the time discreetly. "thirty more minutes to go." He says to himself, whilst letting out a...
Edward He takes a seat on an empty bench by the fountain.