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"Nothung much I'll tell you what happened,"i smirk
(Tiffany it was supposed to b PONY'S POV so it's all wrong. It's penguins house)
(is opal on)
(:)
*calls Opal to meet me at my house*
-hides in the place and sees the guy talking- "I knew it!" I said a few swear words.
Bump
"That is exactly he said Mr. Horus sent him and he said he was a good one. He said he could help us. "
()
(.....)
"Yep....and I almost hated him because he said he had powers..."
(sure bye)
"And he says someone calls Mr. Hocus sent him. Oh yeah and his names Mike. "
"He thinks he has powers,"
"Yes I would," I say
"Yeah Opal she's ok but there's this new guy. "
(back. No one else on?)
PONY'S POV Well. I only went into her house because of Dolph. So I told her the whole thing. "Wow! I knew it! You can't even do a cartwheel!...
"Come in!"I said. She came in all right. She sat on the sofa on my right. "You do know it's my birthday,right?"she said. "Yeah, I knew! Can I...
"Hey Pony!"I said nervously but trying to be happy. She gave me a you-know-I-don't-want-to-be-here-but-I-am-forced-to look. Oh well. You...