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Will do Holly.
Bump!
After while she had to go home. I was about to drive to her house the next day, and when I was about a mile a way a car came from the left side...
Bump!!!!!!!!
I keep checking back for updates, and there is never any. >.<
If anyone gets confused or anything, follow and chat me and I will tell you anything you need.
I've never seen them.
MommaPie: Look at ShepardsPie story The Day Your Grandparents Met, we did this idea before this thread was made.
You do realize me and my friend Pie have done the first story to do this right? And you're totally capitalizing off our idea.
She didn't recognize me because she is now blind.
I'm back on track. Lol
I'm lost. >.>
BUMP
To get this story going again, I brainstormed some ideas, and here is what I came up with. *Ezio's P.O.V. 1 year later* It been six months since...
Now we can understand what Chase is thinking. May I also suggest something else? If you would put paragraphs between dialogue and different...
I think you need to do Chase's point of view. It's a good story outline, but you're not showing if Chase is really a good person or bad person....
My character...is great. Haha This story however, is amazing!!!
My mom is home. She is NEVER home. What is she doing here? "Hello Wesley. Who is this? She looks awfully...provocative." "Don't say that about...
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