Separate names with a comma.
I described his height and weight to give a proportional description of what his build would look like.
Oh, I did? I'm sorry! I didn't mean to. These are some of my friend's names...
It's the mysteriousness of why he's like this...
As I sit in the room, I can't help stare at the clock. The second-hand seems to move slower now that I'm watching it, but I can't wait for this to...
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Just for you Katie. ><><><><><>< "Katrina." She said in a soft tone. "Well Katrina, we should probably get up." "Yes, I suppose we should....
Sexxy* Sorry, autocorrect is so innocent!
The Script. I love you for that quote sami. Great story!
I want an update!!!
I think I like the angel dude's opinion... The main character ditched him for a guy she just met... She doesn't understand love very much. I think...
I'm guessing it'll be my time next time. Lol
I seriously need to update this...
Any creative thing you wish to think about. Lol
I need an introduction for my reprising my role. Por favor? Lol
This story is going to take an interesting turn. :) I woke up to my alarm. I slept that long!? Well, it feels good to have this much sleep. I got...
Got to bump this so I can update later.
This is amazing. Very detailed, very descriptive, and has many different elements of genre. This story could only get better if you somehow...
Hey Pie, could you preferably make the updates longer, with longer paragraphs? The short paragraphs make the reader bored because one thought is...
Thank you for this thread! Brilliantly said! The monotonous stories of unoriginality and no people giving constructive criticism... You truly hit...
Then I shall reprise my role when I see a right moment. Lol