Separate names with a comma.
Sorry for posting that twice, it said it didn't post.
Before I could do anything, I slammed the knife on the table, initially breaking the handle off the blade. I was angry, and couldn't take the fact...
You haft to realize how much it hurt him...
Callnaidas, you must leave this thread by rule of forums. If the owner asks you to leave, you must.
"What were you going to say?" I asked sternly as I pulled her to a stop. "Nothing!" "Listen, I know I'm depressive, unsocial, and have a lack...
Is it me, or is this IDENTICAL to I Am Legend?
Nobody is reading... :(
You can tell me soon.
True... Well, I guess I'll speak to you tomorrow then.
It's okay, we can talk through forum.
You bypassed... Whenever you do a cuss word, make sure it's totally starred out. This is why we use asterisks.
No, Alexia!!! You can't be silenced!!! :(
Update!!!
Love it, except for the third-person, but nonetheless love it.
This mall was actually extraordinarily big. I have been in many malls, never this one. It had stores with every possible category of items you...
Need to update! So I'm bumping!
Shorter paragraphs unless it is really long dialogue. 6-7sentences, or maybe 5-6 depending on how long they are. But long paragraphs give me...
I updated today. Lol
Fletch, critique my story Downplayed please?