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Zhar looks up at Haven, for once the tears not evaporating. "Because without Arija, I will have the dreams again..."
Zhar: "I can't do that, head-mistress..."
Zhar stops, thinking about the state he left Arija in. "They.... They told me to leave..." Zhar falls to his knees, his eyes and voice changing...
"You shouldn't be so rough with people who look so scared. Did you make him that way?" Zhar says, as his eyes turn black.
"Hey!" He says at Edward, his voice turning demonic again. "Where did you take that guy who ran into me?"
Zhar sees Edward do this, and his blood starts boiling. "Edward..." Zhar gets up, and starts walking towards Edward and Darkrai.
"Oof!" Zhar fell onto the ground. "Hey! Watch where you're going!"
(...)
Zhar walks the school grounds after he is asked to leave the infirmary. He doesn't know what to do, but he wants revenge on the Black Bloods and...
(So what's wrong?)
(If it's about the intro thing, I have reasoning behind doing that.)
(Ok)
(What?)
(So when will the time skip happen? All of my character are done for now lol)
(Hopefully it works this time lol) http://media-cache-cd0.pinimg.com/236x/4f/42/b6/4f42b6d21dd5f2bc8e45638ec95c96b6.jpg
(Crap... Didn't work...)
(Decided to add a pic of Zhar. Just get rid of the demon wings lol) http://www.pinterest.com/pin/350366045984596681/
(Oh, I forgot to mention to everyone this: when the RP starts, please let me make the first post. It is more of an introduction that anything else.)
(So I think we will start when there are three more characters. Preferably two assassins, and one Hierarchy.)
(Which was his next class, and since he loves her, being late and making her be mad at him hurt him emotionally. Then he also didn't do anything...