Separate names with a comma.
I know, I like it do far, it's just hard to read
Use betterer grammer! and punctuate. More details, less abbreviation. Kill of*shudders* it
Luke: *sneaks up behind dianna* boo! *picks her up and runs to the playground/park(?)* ariella! Let's play catch with dianna *smiles*
Chris: *is in a cage*
Luke: here's the castle, I'm sorry to leave you pamella but I have big brother things to do *smiles* Jacob: I guess I'll go do my thing...()
Luke: yeah, I was hoping Jacob could clear that up. From what I heard they were good people... Jacob: they are
Chris Elijah's age Mean, snobby, stuck up, and hangs out with the sluts. He can show you pics of his kids but can't tell you their names(not like...
Bump!!!!!
Luke: *walks back to castle with pamella* Jacob: hello Luke *smiles* I was looking for janae, do you know where she is?
Chris: ok, Kathy, make sure Emma is okay. I'm going back to see what that was*teleports awat* Kathy: I guess I will
Luke: janae, we shall leave now, I am sorry that pamella and I were a bother.
(Jacob is 10 again, when alida comes on I'll make a mate for the four year old)
Luke: hmm, I dont know if we have a choice... Maybe we can just go around into the woods between us... And doesn't Jacob always hang out with janae?
Luke: here we are... Looks like the back of the infinite castle...
Luke: hmm, we're almost there
Luke: I guess that was a bad idea. Hm, yes! I still have my sword! Brigit, let's go back to land
Luke: I don't know
Luke: *dolphins pull up*(darn sal! Your ruining my life! )
(lol)
(I expect you to give her some tongue to keep her interested. See, she pulled away!))