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Chris: *wander 'round* 'Lo?
(gayness?)
(he is a Demond, devil)
(a deoval)
(poor sal.)
Chris: Kathy, um... Guys, come here!(Chris can do everythingask emma)
Luke: hello lil sissies!
(was I accepted?)
Luke: *hugs pamella* thanks a whole bunch. I mean it
Luke: *kisses her forehead* you couldn't have helped me more, you did your best, and isn't that the best you can do?
Luke: ok, we are almost there, do you know where they went?
Idk... I like this one, it seems more like its developing better than her others. It's not rushed. Your confused read it again
Luke: ok, I'll get you to the infirmary, what happened?
Score: 15/15 haters be hatin
Luke: hmm, what's that? Ugh. I'll go see*walks down to dungeon*. Pamella! Are you ok!*lets her out*
Chris: *walks in* now, what do you want mr.... DAD?! Dad: yes son, where is Kathy? Chris: at home. With my wife. Who your thugs tried to take!...
(*knife) Jacob: sal!! Help! *thinks* there will be more. What now
Jacob: and that's why*takes a life and slits the guys throaght* you don't talk to a 10 yr old*breaks of into a run looking for Sal*
Jacob: and I don't know what I'm doing** do if I negotiate with you whatever I promise you will most likely never be whateverthewordis
Jacob: well, I think you should talk to someone else. I'm 10.