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-I smile- "yeah it isn't bad..." -I look to where he's pointing- "who is that?"
For an 11 year old...you're good :D :)
:lol: Lol yes...There's you XD
"I know" -I walk in until the water level is on my waist- "Oh..."
-I take a deep breath and walk further-
-I smile and take his hand,gripping it as I step slowly in the water-
Can someone wall my other readers of the new update? I don't have time :(
Okay so I'm going to show you Ethan's side of the story now since Kate is unconscious. I personally picked 4 of my best readers to feature in my...
Bump...working on it now so I'll post it up later ;)
-I look at him- "Would you help me? I want to get in the water. To face my fears...I think I can do it if you're near me"
"I know... Im still scared of the water after all that happened to me before."
I'll try to update after I come back from school :)
-I finish eating and walk to the edge of the water. I shiver, remembering the incident at the lake and when I went overboard-
"Thank you" -I eat it-
-I nod and sit down -
-I smile and hug him tighter-
"I love you too..." -I watch the fireworks-
-I look at her,shocked- "No...your highness...where have you heard such a thing?"
-I pull away and rest my head against his chest as I wrap my arms around him-
-I approach her, out of breath- "Princess...Why are you out here?"