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Zhar smiles. "Not to me, she's not."
Heath grins. "Thank you..."
Zhar walks over to Arija, kneeling by her head, whispering in her ear. "Arija.... It's time to wake up."
(Ipod about to die)
Zhar looks at himself and his new wings. "This could use some getting used to..."
White light flashes from Zhar, and the flame around him turns white again. The consequence is now shown: Zhar is now an archangel.
(So no one pays attention to Zhar... Lol)
(Ya, but Ilsa is the leader)
Zhar collapses, now unable to move. "This is the end, I guess..." His remaining black eye turns white.
(I meant he looks at Melly, but is still talking to Ilsa lol)
Heath looks at Melly slightly. "Please... Don't make me leave the team..."
(The fire is unnatural, as it is the consequence for his using of the pink flame. As well, I'm pretty sure Zhar would have moved away from Arija,...
(You just pushed someone who was on fire...)
Heath looks at Ilsa. "So... What happens then?"
Zhar's demon wings are now completely burnt away, as well as his tail. "I... I can't control this flame..."
Arija's flame begins burning Zhar. Zhar grins slightly through the pain. "The irony... A demon being burned alive..."
"Zero, put her down." Zero obeys.
Zhar's flame goes through into Arija's stomach, and Arija's flame surrounds Zhar. The pink flame numbs Arija's pain. Zhar then starts screaming...
Heath sighs. "Sorry.... He's still learning..."
Zhar whispers to Arija again. "Time to end the pain..."