Separate names with a comma.
Me too! I'm 'kiko.
;Akiko turned and went after Max.; Are you new?
;She knelt down and helped snow get free of the tape.; S-sorry.
;Akiko grimaced.; L-let her go! Stop!
;Akiko waves to max.;
Akiko- oh. Sorry. I know I'm st-stupid.
;The man points down the hall.; The door with your name on it leads to your room, get unpacked and make yourself at home. Feel free to get to know...
Are you Max?
;A cheerful, tall man greets Max.; Hello!
Oh. Okay. What's an ackwayntance?
;Akiko, bored, begins to talk to Betsu.;
(didn't realize it was jb...)
(yep, both are done very well.)
(accepted.) ;Akiko turns around.; wanna be friends?
I'm gonna go away now. S-sorry.
;Akiko blinked.; N-never mind.
(can't disagree with that naviesa. If you want a hated character perfection is an easy ticket.)
;The speakers gave one more announcement.; Until lunch children may do whatever they please seeing as it does not cause injury to others or damage...
(teehee, but hipstah, so are most of the things in this thread.)
;Akiko stood awkwardly.; Th-this is Betsu. He's my best friend. ;She showed Ariel the teal stuffed rabbit. It was rather ragged and the tips of...