Separate names with a comma.
-I jog past the trees following the trail and ended up at the lake-
( I was never going to leave, I meant to restart my arrival)
( scratch my post) - I wake up early and went out jogging in the woods with earplugs going on full blast-
(stage? )
I like it but try to add in paragraphs and leave a line whenever you have direct speech well whenever necessary.
( it seems like Takon and Julie/Becky/Angel/Antwon are always the couple in the RPs)
(okay you know what...I'll just transfer now since you guys went to far...again) -I look around while clutching my bag full of clothes-
(nevermind...I read the whole thing ) -I walk to the amusement park and find all of them gathered together. I approach them- "Hey..." -I smile-
( That's so far! Catch me up please )
"Oh...that's okay" -I smile- (gtg school don't go too far)
(Sal! no! Boy and girl in the same cabin?)
-I arrive in my red shiny sports car. I walk towards my cabin after apologizing for my lateness. I see people at the lake and smile-
-Walks to the school, looking around cause I'm new here.- (does this school have dorms? Or do we have houses?)
Where did everybody go? should we start?
( I'm so annoying. Lol I'll just give the basics. Name: Rose Blond long wavy hair, clear ocean blue eyes. (eyes turn red if thirsty for blood)...
You should try putting paragraphs i like your story but it's a bit disturbing when I see only a few lines on one post for a story.
I think I should be in a cabin alone for awhile then move in to charlie's later in the RP.
I want to room mate with you, can I?
I'm in cabin 6
Do I get one dorm all to myself?