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I like beans' panting/ drawing
goodness
Never! I like chatting
It's pimd's forums
Bump it feels a bit awkward bumping my own story....
I always love your writing great plot, I wanna read more and I agree with roze, a new dialogue line is about the only thing I can think of right...
Fat Liver Lee.....
Tango the hairy banana slug
I want to know more....
Try using more colorful words than said. And instead of all caps rage, try saying shouted or something.
will there be a "twist and shout" twist in the story? And btw I was reading and I noticed slight similarities to my story.....just saying.
But but but.... This way spams forums and may get you a forum ban. I'd rather you not get banned so you can continue this story
question.... You know you already have a thread named this consisting of the same plot. I'm just wondering if you know that when you update...
would you feel better if I bumped it?
I do like Roy's writing......
Yes! You do that.
Ok I shall right tomorrow instead of doing my much needed school work... Post maybe Wednesday or Thursday?
bump
Yay
is it right now?