Separate names with a comma.
Akiko- ;Nods and sets off for the kitchen.;
Akiko- ;Glances towards the cafeteria.; I-I'm hungry...
Akiko- ;Fidgets, kneading Betsu's soft body.;
Akiko- ;Nods.;
Akiko- ;Backs up.; 'm scared...
Akiko- Why d-d-does that c-caretaker have a gun?...
Akiko- A-Anni?
(that's okay, I'll pm you an update when you're back.)
Elaborate!
Try to use more description. Show, don't tell. Use sensory details.
Akiko- ;She tiptoes out of her room and taps Anni's shoulder.;
;He puts his helmet back on an returns to his post beside the gate.;
;The caretaker smiles.; Okay.
Akiko- ;Waves to Jess before ducking back into the room, shy.;
;The caretaker nods.; I know how you feel. Sometimes I feel like this is a prison too. Just ignore the fence and make friends, okay? You'll be...
(it's okay. Scratch last caretaker post, he's still sitting next to Anni.)
Akiko- ;Stuffs the candy into her pocket and peeks out the door.; H-hello?...
Akiko- ;Looks at the candy curiously.;
Akiko- I'm gonna go and see who's up... W-wanna come with me?
Your original point was to move our 'roleplay headquarters' to FC.