Separate names with a comma.
;The caretaker nods.; Yep, your room is right down that hall. It'll have your name on the door.
;A caretaker opens the door.; Hi! What's your name?
Akiko- ;Staying behind the bed, she clutched Betsu.;
(oh. Kay.)
(pretty sure you mean "the end justifies the means" or something like that.)
Akiko- ;Remains behind the bed.;
Akiko- 'mfine....
(accepted. Come to the front door so a caretaker can let you in.)
Akiko- ;She scrambled back, falling off the bed.; O-ow...
(eh, better. Accepted once you add important facts.)
Akiko- ;Stares at the picture.;
(not accepted, Jessica. That isn't even half of the skelly. -.-)
Akiko- ;Nods.; Y-you're the nicest p-person I ever met...
('Kiko prefers the term 'traumatized individual'.)
Akiko- Th-th-thanks, Max... ;She blushes.;
(Grey's a smart cookie.)
Akiko- ;She grins.; Is that me?...
Akiko- ;Sits up.; S-see what?
Akiko- ;She wipes her nose on the sleeve of her shirt, which is too big for her.;
Akiko- ;She sniffled softly, winding Max's sheets around her fist.;