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Gareth: "What kind of payment is that?" Zhar smiles before kissing her again. Warren: "Sure"
Zhar laughs before kissing Aria. "It should be a sin to love you as much as I do." Warren: "I just go wherever. I never know where I'm going...
Malibur sighs and manipulates Jake's blood back into his body.
Malibur looks at him, unimpressed. "Come inside." He walks into his house.
(Alright) Malibur joins Jake beside him, not noticed until he talks. "Seems you are hot-headed in your sleep as well..."
(Wasn't your character named Daniel, writer? XD )
Zhar kisses Alice again: http://i92.photobucket.com/albums/l25/sarahcfgirl/Anime%20People/kissing-oceanbluebackground.jpg (Closest to our...
Warren grins. "Where to?" Zhar smiles. "You always have been one to sleep in." Gareth glares at Derek. "With what? I have no need of money."
Zhar smiles. "I also love how much you blush."
Gareth: "I need my fucking stuff. Otherwise, you are making me do something I don't want to have to do." Zhar smiles, and puts his arms around...
Zhar: "No, there aren't... You are the only one like yourself... No one here is as pretty and kind as you."
(Thanks. I'll keep the Zhar time skip though) Zhar yawns as he wakes up next to Aria. Warwick looks around, and spots Mary in the infirmary bed...
Zhar laughs. "You know what I meant. I... I have never meant anyone as pretty and kind as you... That first day seeing you, and seeing how kind...
Zhar pulls back, smiling, hand still on her cheek. "I have had a crush on you ever since that first day you needed a horseshoe..."
Zhar sits up. "Well I don't doubt it." Zhar places a hand on Alice's cheek and kisses her softly.
(Can I just say that everything I said after the other time skip is happening now instead?)
Zhar: "Of course you are. You are prettier than every woman in this town combined."
(I won't time skip or anything in it, that way others aren't left behind)