Separate names with a comma.
Akiko- ;She moved to sit up, her back against the pillow of her bed. She hugged her knees, her face red from crying, and stared at Anni silently.;
Akiko- Uh huh! ;She nods again, smiling.;
Akiko- ;She nods.; O-okay. What kind of drink do you want? And what's a pronto?
Akiko- ;She sniffled.;
Logically*
Teehee. The story is pretty good. Oh, but you don't need to go down two lines for a new paragraph. Do one and go nine spaces in (or press enter,...
Then wouldn't they locally use plastic utensils?
Akiko- ;Sits a few meters away from the group, watching them.;
Akiko- ;She doesn't respond, her head buried in her pillow.;
Silverware doesn't rust. It tarnishes. Almost all metal utensils are covered in a thin layer of silver.
Akiko- ;Embarrassed, she runs out of the attic and past Anni and Jenni's dorm, flinging herself onto her bed and curling up.;
(guys! We need a little more racism towards Akiko. She's of a Nzel race after all.)
Akiko- Can I help make weapons?
Akiko- I... I think I l-like you?...
(sure is!)
And in my RP chatroom when we would star an RP with another person we would send a long message describing our character's appearance and what...
Teehee. Not even first messages are often long enough to require paragraphs.
I feel like an idiot for saying this, but... SPaG?
Akiko- I was just... W-wondering...
Akiko- ;Looks down, biting her lip.; Nuth'n...