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(Seriously Grim? You have 6 characters now..)
(Ya... I want to be older Hiro already lol)
(So Takashi is all on his own... And Bright is now obsolete since he now has no purpose...)
(Well how about I just fuck right off, since no one listens to me!? No one in the club, no one here, none of my friends in real life, heck,...
(Who's to say how long he was traveling for?)
I was saying that, if there's too many updates, readers won't want to read because there is too much at one time. And Fume, I don't tell people...
Also.... Says*
Microsoft word is wrong a lot of the time.
Takashi stands behind Vance. "So, what do you say?" Bright sighs. "Well we have to choose somewhere to go..."
(Can't we just make it so everyone gets ONE ability per character? Cuz really... Percy Jackson had being able to stay underwater for a long time)
(...)
(.... I am a son of Hades yet I got yelled at for doing that Nick...)
(Seriously? I teleport, and I get yelled at for being a "god"...)
No, it isn't. People commonly make the mistake from the word "should've", and take it as "should of". You would say "I have gone to the fair" but...
(Takashi can see the souls of people if it is dark enough. They are demi-gods. They have to have SOME sort of power. I am at least making flaws....
(My characters DON'T know everything.)
(It's called getting bits and pieces of a prophecy. Also, it could be like getting messages from Apollo in his sleep to help him.) Bright: "Sure,...
(Apollo is sun and prophecy. Bright is the son of Apollo)