Separate names with a comma.
(holy crap! monaca:factory is awesome!)
Akiko- ;She took the bowl.; Thank you... ;She walked to the table where Jack sat, placing the soup down roughly. A little broth splashed from the...
Akiko- ;She stood for a moment, then rushed past him, skidding to a halt in front of a cafeteria worker. Her manner then became less playful.;...
Akiko- 'S okay. Lemme past?
Akiko- ;She twist around him.; 'Kiko.
No. It's a short story that fits into the sci-fi genre, not a story that's sci-fi and happens to also be short.
Akiko- ;Waves to Zach, her ears perky as she stopped running. She now wore socks to protect her feet from the cold floor of the lunchroom.;
Akiko- ;Ran down to the lunchroom.;
I'm not sure but it seems like it from my experience on KaW fanfic. By the way did any of you guys see that one story that was up for like a day...
This is borderline lockable for sexual content. I think. Almost certainly will be if it continues.
Seriously, you just added two horribly written roleplays back to front page. GET OUT.
I know you own the roleplay. Why do you hate trolling? It's hilarious.
Let's not. There are so many roleplays.
Teehee, are you trolling, black?
Thanks! I did have paragraphs but for some reason the copy-paste got rid of them.
(we didn't even take it to pm, teehee... According to Jack it's scarily illegal.)
Okay! ;She took Samie's hand, stepping out into the hall.;
Akiko- ;She smiled.; It's okay. I'm hungry.. W-wanna come with me to the l-lunchroom?
Akiko- ;Sits down.; I... I'm scared... I don't think I wanna d-do anything...
(Jeez, that's actually quite scary.)