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WHOA. CALM DOWN.
(I know... But it also means most of the time when I type I don't even have to try.)
Sever*
Nicely put, Jen. (^_^)
Akiko- ;She looked towards Betsu, singing softy to him.;
Akiko- ;Curls up in her chair, turning away from them.;
Agreed. This isn't anywhere near as bad ad some of the other roleplays I've seen, but it's not great. I think it would help to go through...
Akiko- ;Lies down, whispering to herself.;
Akiko- ;Sits on Jessica's bed.;
Akiko- ;Shrugs.;
Don't. We have way too many roleplays already.
Akiko- Can I touch it?...
Akiko- Why? How?...
Akiko- ;Giggles.; Mr. Light, it's when you wanna be friends with someone but also kiss and hold hands an' stuff...
Bump.
Akiko- I think he does, though... He did kiss you.
Akiko- ;Shrugs.; I don't know. Nobody ever really liked me.
Akiko- What are you doing?...
Akiko- D-does Light like you, Snow?...
Akiko- ;Sits down in a chair near them.;