Separate names with a comma.
Name: Nilal Tīya Race: Fallen Angel Age: 1,552 Years Group: Nzel Position in Group: Advisor Backstory: Nilal was born during the age of the...
(I think I'll make another character for Nzel, as little Maest is adorable but not very interesting.)
You don't need to put parentheses on a story thread, we understand that what you're saying isn't actually part of the story.
Pretty sure the 1600s is several hundred years past the middle ages.
Akiko- ;A soft whimper comes from within the bathroom.;
-.-
Akiko- ;Feeling uncomfortable, she carefully steps over snow and walks into the bathroom.;
Nothing*
Akiko- N-notching exciting, Miss Snow...
When you post several times I have to go on the thread several times because I can't stand red on my screen.
Stop bumping for no reason, Jess. Put everything that you wanna say into one post.
Akiko- ;Smiles back, her ears perking up a little as she sat down next to them.;
Akiko- O-okay. Can I sit down?...
Akiko- Uhm... Snow and Light, d-do you need anything?...
Akiko- ;She passed Snow and Light, giving a shy wave as she rushed past them.;
Maest- ;Sniffles, sitting down in the grass and rolling up fistfuls.;
Maest- ;Runs outside.; What's everybody looking... at.... ;He blinks for a moment, not comprehending the situation.;
(this just got really interesting.)
Sigh... The Whale.
Not Moby Dick.