Separate names with a comma.
Okay cool. Lol
Great story, as usual
Half dressed?! *Rereads story*
Oh wait! My height is 5'3"! Lol
Can I be in it? Gabrielle or Bonnie Eyes: Hazel Hair: Brunette Age: 26 Pretty, petite, intelligent, funny, passionate about things that are...
I bet a mod can do it. *Is looking for a lurking mod*
This is a great story but why didn't you put it in the fanfiction section?
Dittle!!! Oh, good story. Lol
*Does the awesome update dance*
I like that idea Jennifer. What do you think OP?
He plays PIMD? lol
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*is lurking*
Single quotes around thoughts? There has to be a way to tell when the person is finished thinking.
*Their thoughts not they're thoughts. They're = they are. I also think you need to use quotes even when someone is thinking.
I could do an update! Lol
I know kellster!
Please update!!! I'll give you cookies!
No no, the quote is, "I'll get you my pretty, and your little dog too!" Smh. That's why they kicked you out.
Hehe.