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(Dude, seriously. What you would've down would be more damaging to your characters than mine. Hitting Nigel would make him pull down on the cane...
Nigel wraps his cane around Vinnie's throat and pulls him back as Gordon wraps his arm around Leon's throat, putting a pistol against his head....
I just can't think of a good way to continue it.
So I'm thinking of just making a new story instead of continuing Wedding of Redemption.
Gordon: "For god's sake. I just lost a daughter and now you're trying to turn the other against me!?"
(...)
(Cane was metal)
Nigel hits Vinnie in the head when he leans over. "I didn't touch you. My cane did. Also... don't threaten me or anyone else again."
Nigel brings down his cane on Vinnie's hand, knocking the gun away. "There will be no more shooting at this family."
Gordon whispers into Anya's ear. "Just play along."
Nigel: "It really was inevitable, Gordon... you knew that when you joined the English mafia. All of us did. It was only a matter of time before it...
Gordon: "I need you to be strong, Anya..."
Gordon hugs Anya, pretending to be sad. "It's time." Nigel nods at Gordon and Anya.
Nigel whispers to the doctor on the way out. "This should make up for your debts with the 'medicinal tea'." Nigel walks out without any resistance.
Gordon smiles. "Well now, we wait."
Nnigel walks around to the side of Mia that Vinnie isn't on. He makes sure to take steps without noise and without sending too much vibration...
(Been there ten days. Wouldn't have been last night. As well, stop being assholes. Respect that they want to write a story this way rather than...
(What did I miss?)
(Sorry. Phone is being slow so it posted three times for some reason.)
Nigel hands Gordon a vial. "Be a gentleman and get me a tea, will you?" Gordon nods and walks down to the hospital cafe.