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Elswhere, Zodiac begins writhing in pain. "This... this was you plan all along... wasn't it..."
Zodiac turns away from everyone. "I'm sorry... continue on with training without me for now..." Zodiac disappears in a burst of flame.
Drake: Takes the gun out and tosses it to Jo. "Catch."
Zodiac: "Nothing... probably nothing..."
"This can not be our home..." Zodiac grunts in pain and grabs his one eye.
Drake: "Is the safety on for the spear and just for show as well?"
Drake: Puts the gun in my waistband. "Not until you two learn how to safely use it."
And why bother with pimd relationships...
First story was Wedding of Redemption, which was me playing around with writting style as well as introducing the antagonist to my next story, who...
Drake: Catches the gun. "Don't you know that tossing guns is dangerous?"
Zodiac, his eyes still white, sets fire to the house and super heats it after pulling anyone that was in it out. He burns it to ash rubble before...
"Enough!" Drake flings his arm, attracting the sword and flinging Dark away from Sadey. "I'm sick of all this fighting! You want to fight, let us...
(Zodiac was still disappeared. As well, the eyes were emitting a kind of light.)
Drake steps towards everyone, scowling. Damon stays back, watching.
The white eyes continue to appear everywhere. "Only the young have reason to fear the dark."
Zodiac: "I'm the one that didn't check to see if the Black Knight had children... this is my problem to solve..."
Drake: I prefer Ben (Sorry. Couldn't resist)
Zodiac sends an energy barrier infront of Sadey. "No more. Your fight is with the hunters. This is something I should have ended centuries ago..."...
"You're one to talk... I have centuries on you." Zodiac says it so it is only heard directly into Dark's ear.