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Jess: -Rolls her eyes- Where to, sir Jack***? -Smirks-
People barely say that, it's ussually just "bump" or update". I'd recomend asking someone personally...
Writing a story is not about people saying "bump". It's nice to have, but it isn't the purpose of wiriting. If you write your stories purposely...
Jess: Yeah. -Stands up, moving her hand away- Where to?
Jess: -Eyes widen- Is she okay??
The thing: -Makes the fence turn electric if they climb to a certain point- (Brb)
Jess: -Nods, a glint of hope in her eyes. Searches through her bag and comes out with matches and a small knife, she took from the stall at the start-
Jess: -Looks interested- How may we be able to escape?
The Thing: -Rolls his eyes, watching through a screen-Idiots... Jess: -Looks up- Yeah..?
*brick wall*
Jess: -Pulls on her hoodie and slips out through the gap in the bricks. Pulls up her hood as the rain soaks her. Leans against the brick -
Jess: -Nods-I'm fine... I'm going to take a walk, to get some fresh air...I'll be back soon.. -Stands up and stretches-
Never seen you write, like a story before; you should write more often. It's good.
Bandit: -Laughs- Yep
Bandit: Uh okay... -Blushes a litle bit too, but looks down to hide it- That'd be cool.
>.<
(Yeah, sorry xD) Bandit: No thanks, I'm full on apple pie -Grins-
Jess: -Laughs- I'd never have guessed -Jokes, smiling lightly-
(Jess= •Because she's un-trusting after what happened with Miya. •Because she thought her and her friends were the only ones locked in.) The...
(Cya.)