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The thing: -Takes a dagger from his belt. Twirls it in his hands- I'd advise you cut the atitude
Proof read...You need to proof read...Badly... >.<
Jess: -Jumps. Looks around for Snow and realised her voices is coming from undetneath the floorboards. Shouts- Snow? Where are you? The Thing:...
The thing: -Enters his cabin. Looks taken aback but then annoyed- Hello idiotic boy. I take it Miya brought you?
Jess: -Whispers- Snow? Erza? Noah? Damnit, where are you guys?
Jess: -Looks around lost. Whispers- Snow?
The Thing(TH): -In his cabin.-
Jess: -Nods- D-Do you know where Snow is?
Jess: -Stops to catch her breath for a second-
(*runs. Cannot spell today. >.< )
Jess: -Rubs after Snow-
(Sorry, what did Miya say that was directed at the thing?)
*She as in Erza
Jess: -Looks around to find out where she is- The thing: Up to you. Do what you like, just make sure they're all disposed of by starting time.
Jess: -Nods, and follows Snow-
The Thing: -Pacing-
Jess: -Laughs- Its okay, it's rude to punch a girl -Smirks-
The thing: -Sends a message to Lani- Already done. Jess: -Blushes and grumbles- Way too turn my words against me
(Ignore my last Jess post.)