Separate names with a comma.
I'll update after you when I'm done with my story.
I'll update in 2 hours.
How about you two share her character like the first update Magi does then Mandy does the next update.
Nayr:-smirks and grabs the crystal- Ryan, when I say go you fire. Ryan: Okay… -readys my bow- Cool a arrow appears when I pull Nayr: Yup -tosses...
Ryan:-parks and walks up to my apartment-
Ryan:-starts driving with Linkin Park playing-
(Didn't you see the picture) Nayr: We have to destroy it. Ryan: Will the light bow work?
No M.U. as in Magical Unicorn
(Her… Nayr is a boy)
Nayr: What happened to her -looks at everyone in the tent- Ryan: Nobody wants to tell me anything.
Ryan: See yah -starts my car-
Ryan: No problem… if you ever need a ride you know who to call -Smiles-
I'll update after M.U.
I found some mistakes but they were not. Story killing mistakes like 1: I slide on my knees. You could've put I slid or I fell. 2: You have a...
(Nayr)
Nayr: Ryan!!! -sees a girl coughing up blood- Oh no… [img]
Ryan: -Pulls up at Jess's house- Hey Jess, wake up
Ryan:-keeps driving- (A little)
Ryan: Nayr!! Nayr: What? Ryan: Ummm what do you know about a black spirt crystal. Nayr:That when touched by a Demigod, gives them the power to...
Ryan: -Taps the steering wheel to the beat-