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Scilence
Thank u Kane!!(:
Jay: -shots rapidly- ain't no body gon come in here
Will sadly have to write tomorrow
John: -finishes eating- Jay: -shots every target perfectly-
(Guys unless u can climb into the dirt and make a whole to go into the base.... u can't see us)
Haha LOVE the story, except a little punctuation and its going to fast, so much drama haha but other then that.... I FREAKING LOVE IT!
Hmm how did'Ten Seconds Left' start this? Haha
Ohhhh I read that I forgot to post!!
Jay: -skips food and practices shotting- John: -goes to lunch and looks for healthy food-
Aww, really? What's it called?
Jay and John: YES, sir!
(yeah Jay could be in a girls army group or something?)
Haha when I was writing I knew something was off haha thanks
Kay and John: Yes, sir!
Ahhhhh! I just saw that! thanks for reminding me. I'll change her age to 6 and the sisters to 25. But I'll keep the main characters age the...
Jay J 16 Army Tough, strong, fast reflexes, good at killing and hunting, loves her guns and knives [img] John J 18 Army Just like sister, except...
Me too haha
OHHH I wanta join!!
Hunter: -walks away and does nothing-