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Jess: -Eyes widen, realising somethings off- W-who's there??
Jess: -Regains her balance, lifting her paw slightly into the air so it doesn't hit the ground- ...What the hell just happened? >.>
Jess: -Switches into her wolf form just before she crashes to the ground. Winces, feeling her paw turn the wrong way- ****...
Bandit and Jess: -Begin to walk across the school grounds-
Jess: Fuck! -Screams as the branch cracks and breaks. Begins to fall, flailing around-
I wanna get snake bites at some point, and I plan on getting a nose piercing soon. I just have to persuade school. XD I also like tattoos though....
Jess: -Yelps, begining to feel her branch crack. Sits bolt up right-
Jess: -Asleep in a tree branch-
I hate you. I lost. D: >.<
*Doggy's
That doggies so cute. >:O
*Message. 
(Uh oh. D: xD. ) Jess: -Leans back on the branch lazily-
Jess: -Gazes at the sky, daydreaming-
Jess: -Sits crossed legged on the highest branch- (If you say so...)
I like your writing, but it's a touchy subject to write about. It seems pretty good so far though. 
(Read back a bit... :3 Blade.. What the hell is a leprechaun dance?!?) Jess: -Shrugs and begins to climb higher up the tree-
Jess: -Distracted by a rabbit. Watches it run across the grass then winces- I get distracted to easily....What was I doing again? -Thinks-
Jess: -Watches them, from a distance-
Jess: -Croutches down on the branch-