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Wow.... I look at this story and the ones from now.... This story is horrible!!!!
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-.- off my thread tristan!
Tehe! here's and update! From this point on it will remain in Vanessa's POV. Who was he waiting for? Why did he ask me if I was...
MOMMY BUMP!!!!! Just a little note: separate the dialogue from the paragraphs and separate each paragraph from each other... BUT UPDATE...
NUUUU!!!! DONT DO IT!
STORY IS NOW RE-OPENED!!
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0.0 It took me 2 days
BUMP!!!!
Sorry guys.... Im closing this story.... Im done with writing
I hope so since im a teen myself
0.0 I didnt think it was that good