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(oh wat evs, i gtg soon 20minutes)
-i jump and slice cassidys neck and pushes her away from rose- (y wat did u want to do sal?)
-i jump ou and throw my dagger at her dominant hand, it beds its selfninto her wrist- "not so fast"
-i put my bow away and draw my daggers-
(oh kk disregard last post sorry)
(*neck)
-action time, i roll around the pillar and shoot the arrow at Cassidys head. It hits her in the back, i knocked another aimng at her head-
(sal?!)
-i hold, hear Roses footsteps moving against the stone floor-
-i wait, look over and mouths, u go to save rose ill take te other women-
-i follow sals lead and draw my bow an knock and arrow. Pulling it into ready posistion. I look at Sal and nod-
-i casually stroll and hear roses voice and an other womens. The oter women wants to kill Rose. I crack the door and slip in hide behind a pillar....
-i pick up my weapons and head down stairs to the throne room, this is gonna be a good day i think to my self-
Is it still good? It sounds bad to me personally... I could use some feedback
-wakes up and get ready for a day of planning- "A month, nope. Sal gets a fortnight after his mariage to get goin on this journey" i say to myself
()
(14 nights) Fine i shall stay in castle good night to you all, tpmmorow we plan
^are
"a fortnight, sal people our dying out there, our people. A fortnight is as long as ill wait"
"good we leave in 3 days go pack, till then friends. If you need me ill be in tavern in town. Good luck and may god smile upon you"