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-lightly strokes his cheek, continuing to kiss him-
-Softly presses my lips to his-
Lol I was watching Annoying Orange when I typed it up
-Smiles at Tom, leans in slowly without realising- "..........."
(No shes not. Momma Pie is Goddess geez get it right Sis )
Lol and theres you speaking of spelling Allie
-Strokes his cheek lightly- "Hey Ranger you'll be fine." -Grins- "I talked to my Dad... He's thinking about it."
-Smiles back- "Well I'm sure you'll make a recovery." -Sits on the bed next to him-
-Darts to his side seeing him in pain- "Tom... Are you okay? Would you like me to fetch the Medic?" -Places hand on his forehead checking his...
-Drags Alida up to my room leans against the door frame just watching him-
"Alidaaa! Come and meet him please! You'll like him! Just come on!!" -Begs Alida-
Sigh.... I hate critiscing but you asked for it... Proof read your story before sending it also get someone else to proof read to spot...
-Jumps happily- "Hes in my room!! Right now as we speak!!" -Presses finger to my lips- "Shhh Daddy doesn't know." -Giggles-
Okay check Out my new one! Titanic - LilySnape
You still want criticism...?
(I don't wanna give you harsh criticism! )
"Yes but oh did I mention he wants to be a ranger?" -Smirks at Alida- "I thought you would be happy for me sis."
"T-Tom. A commoner! He is super sweet and cute and kind and caring and...." -Voice goes dreamy- "He saved my life...."
-Runs to Alida- "SIS!! I think I'm in love!" -Worried as I hate falling in love because I always get hurt-
(Iz be no hippie . )