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Vinnie leans forward and places his cross necklace on her, kissing her forehead then getting up and heading for the door.
Vinnie looks down then walks into Mia's room, slowly walking to his seat and sitting down. "Mia...."
"You sure...? Is she even awake?"
Vinnie stopped walking. "What do you mean?"
"She doesn't care... Gordon doesn't want me here. So I'll respect the place I'm in. I'll see yah later yeah..."
"Hey max... It ain't my problem anymore. I'm keeping out of the picture. Stay if you like, I frankly don't care anymore." Vinnie says with putting...
"You know what Gordon... I'm gonna be straight with you." Vinnie says still looking down. "Yes I love your daughter, she saved me and I'm glad I...
Vinnie sits back outside mias room with a can of coke and his hood covering his face. "You know you can get through this Mia..." He quietly...
Vinnie looks at max and nods." So long as he doesn't get to either then I'm happy.." He says walking off to get a drink.
"Just please max...I don't see you as a slave. You are my cousin, but mainly a friend."
(Oh...God....) "Max..do us a favour and keep him out.." He says as he takes mias hand. "Now that's the fighter I know..."
(Right whatever paladin, just quieten down for once please) "Are we ok going back in..?" Vinnie says looking at the doctor. The doctor nods and...
(Exactly so don't use him until it's accepted instead of barging in)
(still who the hell said you could make this character?)
"Max.. It's beeping again.. She's fine" Vinnie says with a sigh of relief.
(Who the heck said he could make that character. He would need kats permission for that. What kind of right minded person barges straight into a...
"And do you know something... Yeh! You haven't shown your face in so god damn long that I think she wouldn't give a shit if you were dead or not....
Vinnie pulls him back out before he's even in the room and straight on punches him in the face sending him straight to the ground. "Who and what...
"Someone call the freaking cops..." He says looking at max.
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