Separate names with a comma.
...well...it's short, need longer, and separating the paragraphs would be good. I don't know the plot or the understanding that well, so I'll say...
Alia- -wakes up, startled, but calms- What! Wait....who the hell are you? Sky- -sighs- Doesnt matter. I should be in hiding already. Alia-...
Short, but good! Bump!
Sky- -sticks out tongue- Whatever, you are just walking away. -gets stuff and walks away- Drama........is that how that was? -grins- Well shoot,...
Sky- -crosses arms- First, that's pathetic. Second, words don't work, stupid. -eyes enraged- I can't believe your that of a weakling.
(sorry Amanda, ......)
Sky- -gets back up wobbling- I said apologize you weakling! -looks straight into eyes- -fists clenched-
( I just think Sky is an overdramitized, freak.)
Sky- -eyes sting with hatred- No! I don't care! You hurt it, now apologize! -kicks him in the nuts- Apologize!
Sky- -feels a burn in her neck and charges through Drake slapping him in the face so hard- -sinks into depression, crying- D-dont do that!
Sky- -sees puppy and looks grim- No....not the puppy...damn him. -silently does a shock spell that burns the neck of Drake and hurried out,...
Sky- -checks her spell book for new spells to try- ....no....no....no....no...ew....no....not likely...maybe...no....no.... -shuts it softly- This...
Sky- -sighs but watches intently-
Sky- -stumbled herself onto the roof of the cafeteria and rests on the roof boards, trying to pitch in what's happening-
(haha it's ok)
Sky- -flinched but stands still, not moving, and tries not to cry, but climbs higher into tree-
Sky- -goes back into cabin and gets Phoenix, but is perched at her bed- Ok sweetie, now go back.. -grabs into portal and closes bag- -exits cabin...
Sky- -scoffs, curious- 10 guards? My sister can do worse! And she's 3! -chuckles softly- But shes stronger that me...
Sky- -mutters softly- Wow. Even I'm not that weak. -perches from tree to tree, do close to Drake- Alia- -takes a nap-
Sky- -perches where Drake is and watches him intently, curious- Alia- -ignores-