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Also, to thank everyone who has contributed and helped on my stories, you guys are the best
Great job guys!
Your fine, stay on this thread and keep going.
It's really getting there. Thank you for putting my advice in.
Hey everyone! Terribly sorry to interrupt, my mind is to a place where I am now tending an to be my Spanish Teacher. Any who, I want to ask...
(._. Jesus, I can barely handle two)
(Go you.) Alia- Lily? Impossible.
Alia- Oh.
Alia- -narrows eyes- Yes? Which new girl? Sky- -Tries to struggle out-
Alia- -looks blank- Yes? About what? Sky- -tries to scream, but throat is too dry-
Alia- -outraged- Ben! What's happened? (Bye!) Sky- -sniffs a few tears as tries to escape-
Very nice and detailed Just love it. I must say, you cause this way of writing to be gory, but imaginable to the human mind, which, is...
On the bullseye
Cherry Very interesting, it gives me a greater look into your story, as I should do to others, I want to dig in. Not sure what's exactly...
Good story The way the details are arranged,are beautiful, it truly can show how badly the girl is suffering. Its hard to add more details, so...
Sky- -tries to run away, but caught by a huge object- Alia- -comes back- I'm.....back? What happened?
Well, Hey! Nadine It's Sky! Well, for starters, I like the way you got the story outlined, it's really interesting, but my opinion, is to:...
When life doesn't bring a stand, You write some poetry to higher demand. I may be a fool, but life is too cruel, To make me do a poem in front...
Sky- -performs spell a water elemental- Alia- -walks away- I'm no part of this.
Pluto