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Frenchie: Are you done torturing me?
Skeyla: -pulls out her old flight goggles- you guys... -shakes her head-
Frenchie: -sighs and refuses to show fear-
Skeyla: -pulls off her flight goggles and puts them on Lana's grave-
Kimmy: -looks out at the lake-
Frenchie: Okay....
Skeyla: -looks at drake- sorry....
Serena: -sighs and sits up against a wall-
Frenchie: No she has been through enough...
Skeyla: -sits by Lana's grave- I'm so sorry....I shouldn't have bullied you in flight school....
Frenchie: -looks down-
Lana: -just buried not too far from where everyone is- Skeyla: -sighs-
Kimmy: -sees sam and Kat and whips her head forward and keeps walking- 0.0
Kimmy: -skips around-
Rarity: -walks off-
Kiki: -falls asleep on the ground, by the lake- (PEDOBEAR: what do we have here >:3>>>>> Yay)
Rarity:
Skeyla: -sighs-
Could you critique my story "If and Then"