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It isn't bad! I enjoy this story! But maybe you could try to better explain the main character's feelings, of her situation, how she feels, or...
Oh the irony!
Agh! Love it! As you've already said, I love how you tie it all together. I can't wait for Toxic's post!
Need to work on spelling/grammar a bit, but it's a great start!
Indeed! I like how it is going. Can't wait for your next post Elysie
Thanks Dan
She's also a bad ass.
Bump. I'll update once I have an idea, because forcing myself to write will not yield good results.
Considering we haven't a clue what the plot is I think it's natural not to know what's happening.
Nah, in my mind he was more of a sadistic psychopath.
Here's my part! I know it won't be as good as the others, but I do hope it is still enjoyable to read. Also keep in mind: this piece by me is from...
Aren't firefighters volunteers?
Woooo! I'm excited.
Toxic, you do great as well.
You're taking a writing class? Good for you! I never had the opportunity. :/
Thank you all!
Thank you!
I tried to leave out some aspects of her appearance, like exact height and weight because I find them unnecessary. Describing her like that (in a...
Bump!
Errr... Shouldn't this be on off topic?