Separate names with a comma.
Okay I'll write something, I need to get back to writing too. Can I PM it to you? I'm excited too! I have patience but sometimes it runs out...
I'll join! I haven't entered a contest for FF yet so I would like to join!
Raven slowly put all the things back into the box. She glanced around and stayed there to think after she put the box back to its hiding place.
You should totally update
Raven takes out the items in the box and stare at them as she remembers the past these items contain.
Raven looks around, she goes to the very back of the room and takes out a couple of books from a shelf. She looks inside there and pops out a...
Raven stayed in the upper level and continued to look around, letting Setsuna have her space.
Raven turn her attention over to Setsuna and raises an eyebrow.
You think he has asked her out by now? Considering it's been 7 days. I had this problem with my crush, totally ignored me. Then I moved and I...
You just got yourself a silence Not supposed to tell us your age
Bump!
Raven goes back to the bookshelves and put her book back in it's place. She looks up at the flickered light and slightly frown.
Yes, seeing the way other writers write might help on your grammar/spelling/capitalization/punctuation mistakes.
Like the two before me have said it has potential but I do agree that you need to fix all of grammars/spelling mistakes. We're big on that in FF,...