Separate names with a comma.
Ben-stares at her, full of pain- I-im...sorry...
Ben-looks away from all of them, tears in my eyes, then sees Lily's ghost-
(And now is when Ben goes mad )
Ben-eyes full of pain, looks at Lily's dead body- Lily.....
Ben-looks at them battle, appearates to Voldemort-
Ben-The family...always help each other...
Ben-looks at the DEs, eyes showing pain, hands Lily to the DEs-
Ben-starts walkin to the DEs grabbing Lily-
(And this is when Ben turns evil) Ben-grabs Lily, aiming the wand to her neck- Stop all of you!
Ben-stops and looks at Lily then at DE, hesitates-
Ben-glares- You sent me here! Its your fault.. -voice starts failing-
Ben-holds her in one arm, holding my wand in the other- Leave now! (Remember, Ben was raised by DEs )
Ben-Lily you are not giving yourself too him
Ben-holds Lily comfortingly-
Ben-holding my wand-
Ben-snaps my fingers and clothes appear on me, quickly stands up, holding my wand ready-
Ben-wakes up startled- What?
(YESS!)
Ben-smiles- Sleep, love....its been a tough day...go to sleep
Ben-smiles, a dreamily expression on my face-