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-feels tears forming- "Th-thank you..." -turns away-
(*say)
-looks at the ground- "In a way... I hope so. I mean... I never got a chance to day good bye. This Breyer be worth it.." -sighs and looks up-
-looks at him- "This will never be my home sir... But I'm sure I'll get used to it..." -bites lip- "Again... Thank you for letting my father go.."
(Okay)
-looks out the window- "If I'm going to live here... What am I going to do... There's nothing to entertain me..." -sits on the ground-
(ALEX!!! I'm sorry! I did fall asleep... ) -walks back to the room- "...I must've made a mistake... But it was for my father..."
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"..." -looks around-
"What do you mean...?" -looks up-
"..." -bites lip to refrain from crying-
-tears form- "Thanks you..." -looks away-
(*my )
"But you still kept him here! In mu mind it's the same!" -looks at Alex- "If you send him home... I'll take his place here... I'll stay here......
-Covers mouth- "D-dad...?!" -runs to him and throws arms around him- "DAD!!"
-Eyes widen- "You people are horrible! I..."
"N-no... I want to go home! Ah! Why'd you bring me here?!"
"Why..?" -Goes to him anyway- "What's wrong?"